The following two paragraphs are how George Eliot describes the refinement and cleverness of Rosamond. Keep in mind that Dr. Lydgate studied medicine in London, Edinburgh and Paris; has seen the “world”, so to speak; Rosamond spent all her life in pastoral Middlemarch (the town name, also the title of the novel).
Certainly, small feet and perfectly turned shoulders aid the impression of refined manners, and the right thing said seems quite astonishingly right when it is accompanied with exquisite curves of lip and eyelid.
“Tell me what you saw in London.” “Very little.” (A more naive girl would have said, “Oh, everything!” But Rosamond knew better.)
Ji Xichun (賈惜春) is one of the Jinling Twelve Beauties, the second cousin of Jia Baoyu (賈寶玉) in A Dream of Red Chamber (紅樓夢). She had a sexual intimacy (溫存了一番) in Chapter 6. Reading the English version one gets an impression that she is a “coquettish” and flirtatious young lady. But that was not my impression reading the Chinese version.
說到雲雨私情,羞的襲人掩面伏身而笑。寶玉亦素喜襲人柔媚姣俏,遂強拉襲人同領警幻所秘授之事。襲人自知賈母曾將他給了寶玉,也無可推託的,扭捏了半日,無奈何,只得和寶玉溫存了一番。
I will comment on the following English translation.
寶玉亦素喜襲人柔媚姣俏
Since Bayou had long been attracted by Xichun’s gentle, coquettish ways. (English translation in book
My comment:
It says Baoyu (寶玉) had long been
attracted by Xichun (惜春) because Xichun is 柔媚姣俏, which is “gentle, gorgeous, and attractive”. It doesn’t imply coquettish (flirtatious, a
playful sexual attraction; teasing; make sexual overture). 柔媚姣俏 may be more of sensual beauty than of sensuous beauty, but still not any tone or suggestion of “coquettish”.
扭捏了半日,無奈何,只得和寶玉溫存了一番
So they tried it out secretly together, and luckily they were not discovered. (English translation in book)
My comment:
In fact, Xichun (惜春) went along, only after much hesitation and reluctance (扭捏了半日,無奈何), which was entirely ignored and omitted in English version.
說到雲雨私情,羞的襲人掩面伏身而笑
Baoyu, then told her his dream in full, concluding with his initiation by Disenchantment into the “sport of cloud and rain.” Xiren [Xichun], hearing this, covered her face and doubled up in a fit of giggles. (English translation in book)
My comment:
雲雨私情 is translated as “sport of cloud and rain”. I bet few English readers know what is “sport of cloud and rain”. 雲雨私情, as in 巫山雲雨, refers to “making love”.
襲人自知賈母曾將他給了寶玉,也無可推託的
As she [Xichun] knew that the Lady Dowager had given her to Baoyu she felt this would not be an undue liberty. (English translation in book)
My comment:
Xichun knew the Lady Dowager had “given her to Baoyu”. In Chinese society the women were treated like an “object”, a “property”, Xichun was “given to Baoyu”, whatever that means; so Xichun felt it was not inappropriate or improper for her to go along with Baoyu’d demand.Mao Zedong claimed he read A Dream of Red Chamber (紅樓夢) five times; he must be infatuated and infuriated by the corrupt society, the custom, the culture and the feudal system the novel exposed. It must have intensified his revolutionary zeal.
























